Wednesday, Oct. 13, 2004 - 10:33 p.m.

Hi! We're now welcoming a bit of a change here, because just now, I've decided to post my writing stuff on the net for everyone to see! This is my english writing assignment, which was to read a story and compose a business letter posing as a character in that particular story. Before I start, you might have noticed that a while ago, my diary was locked. Well that's because I was fixing some of the stuff here, and I guess I've changed a little. If you noticed, the links are now a different colour and the fonts are a little different. (Well the sizes anyways.) Yeah, I know, that was only five second work, but I did do something didn't I?
Oh, right, on to the letter!

Lewisham Police Force
5785 Lewisham Avenue
London, England R7F 8H9
October 8, 1983

Ms Mary Maloney
245 Hill Street
London, England H1R 7K0
Dear Ms Maloney:
We have received your request as to informing you on the actions we, the Lewisham Police Force, are taking to obtain the most updated information on the case 102787, the murder of Patrick Maloney.
As of current, no information is present regarding any suspects that may have been found guilty, nor is any citizen found suspicious of the murder. However, Detective Smith, one of the two detectives that are working on this case (the other being Detective Simmons), has found a person that provided useful clues. This person, who wishes to remain anonymous states that Mr. Patrick Maloney arrived home at approximately ten minutes after six o'clock in the evening 'looking quite disturbed; seemed like something heavy was weighing on his mind.' If you, Madam, can supply us with any more information, please reach us immediately.
That is all for now. When and if we receive further word of anything suspicious, it will be our first priority to contact you as soon as possible.
The staff here at The Lewisham Police Quarters sends our deepest consolations to you and your family on account of this tragic occurrence.
Sincerely,

Jack Noonan
Sergeant

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